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Revise selected drafts by addiing, elaborating, deleting, and rearranging text based on teacher/peer feedback, writer's checklist, or rubric. Apply knowledge of synonyms, antonyms and homonyms to evaluate word choices when revising writing.
There are 7 videos in this category and 6 videos in 4 subcategories.
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Not Right For WatchKnowLearn
Ages: 12 - 15
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This is an entertaining instructional video that elementary school teachers can show to their students to help them better understand the process of revising. Viewers will learn what revising means, the goals of revising, how to revise, and how revis...ing differs from editing. "The video features two students simulating a typical day in the classroom, and they are working on a Writing Workshop project. I filmed the video with these children last summer and debuted it in the classroom this Fall. Watching the two kids in the video work together to revise a piece of writing had a wonderful effect on my students'
ability to cooperate, listen to one another's suggestions, use their time well, and make valuable changes to their initial drafts. (05:55)
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August 14, 2012 at 04:08 PM
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Not Right For WatchKnowLearn
Ages: 10 - 14
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This part of the series fiscusses the process of revising text. It
presents the nonfiction work, Diary of Anne Frank, and a follow-up
activity that reviews revision techniques.
May 26, 2010 at 07:17 PM
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Not Right For WatchKnowLearn
Ages: 9 - 18
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This is a snippet that speaks on revising a paper. It includes defintions and examples. (:30)
November 24, 2010 at 06:45 PM
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Not Right For WatchKnowLearn
Ages: 16 - 18
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This video explains how to revise your college paper, whether it's for a thesis, essay, or story. (2:01)
December 7, 2010 at 12:01 PM
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Not Right For WatchKnowLearn
Ages: 14 - 18
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This video includes excellent information to help writers as they prepare to revise. The video was made for University students (probably freshman writing), but would be beneficial to any young writers. It thoroughly explains what revision is and g...ives many good tips. (06:06)
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August 14, 2012 at 04:23 PM
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Not Right For WatchKnowLearn
Ages: 6 - 18
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This whiteboard demonstration with voice over shows 4 steps to improve basic sentence writing. Change a simple subject and predicate "dog ran" to "The beagle darted." What kind of? "The energetic beagle darted." How? "The energetic beagle quickly... darted." When/where/why? "The energetic beagle quickly darted under the fence." ( 4:16)
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July 10, 2009 at 08:19 PM
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Not Right For WatchKnowLearn
Ages: 10 - 15
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Learn what parenthetical expressions, nonessential phrases, essential phrases are in this video. Comical example sentences with movie footage is shown to go with the sentence. The narrator discusses editing that needs to be done to the sentences....
(Note: the word 'intellectually' is spelled wrong at the beginning of the video.) (5:24)
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February 9, 2010 at 11:07 AM
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